A. 托福作文題目
1. Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe? that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
2. People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
3. People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? something different Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your choice.
4. Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young alts. Other people think? that friends are the most important influence on young alts. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to) support your position.
TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，簡稱TOEFL），是由美國教育測驗服務社（ETS）舉辦的英語能力考試，全名為「檢定非英語為母語者的英語能力考試」，中文音譯為「托福」。TOEFL有三種，分別是：紙考、機考和網考，新托福滿分是120分。托福復習主要資料為托福機經（又稱民間托福答案題庫）。TOEFL考試的有效期為兩年（從考試日期開始計算）；例如：2003年1月18日參加考試，這次考試成績的有效期是從2003年1月18日到2005年1月18日。2014年4月5日，英國內政部與美國教育考試服務中心（ETS）合約到期後，不再續約，而英國大學也不將承認其機構下托福和托業的英語語言成績。
TOEFL，Test of English as a Foreign Language，由美國教育測驗服務社( ETS, Ecational Testing Service)在全世界舉辦，是一種針對母語非英語的人進行的英語水平的考試。TOEFL是出國留學(美國、加拿大)的必備考試成績，美國和加拿大已有超過2400所大學和學院承認這項考試成績，規定了申請者的最低TOEFL錄取分數線。TOEFL成績與獎學金的成功率是相關的。
TOEFL
國外許多政府部門，私人或機構獎學金計劃，執照證明機構等也是依據TOEFL成績來評審接受人的英文程度。在中國，TOEFL亦是英語水平的一種證明，有一些單位(特別是三資企業)採用它衡量應聘者的英語水平。從一九九八年七月起，托福考試在許多國家從傳統的紙筆方式轉變成電腦方式。但亞洲一些國家，如中國大陸、台灣和香港澳門地區等仍採用原來傳統的紙筆方式，暫時不作改變。預計2002年下半年實現計算機化考試。
紙筆考試是由正確答案的數量總和來決定成績總分，而不管問題的難易。電腦考試則不同，它根據回答問題的質量來給出下一個問題，如果考生回答得正確，電腦將提高問題的難度；如果考生回答錯誤，電腦將降低問題難度。因此成績是由正確答案的難度來決定得分，而不是由正確答案的數量。電腦考試的寫作一項，考生可以選擇打字或書寫。 電腦考試的費用：美國及其屬地和加拿大為USD，所有其它國家為USD。
B. 新托福作文
小作文，結合各種模板，總結一個最適合自己的。我是考試剛進去的時候，就把背好模板寫在紙上了，該空格的地方劃了條長線，聽小作文聽力的時候，只需要把幾個觀點聽出來填進去，然後再寫。當然，我在山東考的，不知道你是哪裡人。老師是不會管的，但還是不要太囂張地寫。我覺得這樣做的好處在於，你可以很清楚地知道自己要聽什麼，要寫什麼。並且在長久的考試快結束的時候，即使是思路開始模糊了，也有條理性的寫出小作文。小作文可以拿good的。這是很幫作文提分的。
大作文。中國學生的普遍錯誤在於喜歡寫長難復雜句。可真正的外國老師喜歡KISS(keep
it
simple
&
simple).一個句子不要求寫的多麼難，以此來顯示自己的定語狀語等從句學的很棒一類的。其實即便是每個句子都是主謂賓，只要沒有語法邏輯錯誤，一樣拿高分。我不主張大作文背模板，開頭和結尾背上兩句出彩的話就可以。中間部分一定要邏輯清晰，用連接詞很重要。最重要的就是語法錯誤。不用把重點放在怎麼寫出華美的句子上，從最簡單的句子做起。然後找錯誤。再就是，例子很重要。他們喜歡看學生用簡單的通俗的例子說明一個很抽象的觀點。不要滿篇都是抽象的句子，每段寫上一個符合邏輯的例子，一樣可以博得閱卷老師的歡心。
祝好。
C. 托福課寫作文
O(∩_∩)O~
寫這個的話，加一下俺
D. 托福作文範文26篇還不收藏更待何時
合寫作部分，考生需要在2分45秒內看完一篇學術性文章，接著聽一段與該話題相關的講座錄音，寫作的任務是在20分鍾內就講座的要點，結合剛才讀到的學術文章的內容，寫一篇概述。
E. 老托福的作文
選考我不知道是什麼意思，但是老托肯定也是必須考作文的，而且肯定是筆答
F. 托福寫作範文：誠實是否是社團領導者最重要的品質
Honesty is a good quality to lead a student organization. A lot of students vote for a campaign candidate who is loyal and honest as the best one to lead a student organization. As far as I am concerned, being honest is essential in running a students union; however there are other factors that draw the same attention.
Admittedly, telling the truth when dealing with student affairs is helpful for colleagues to improve. In order to fully support other workmate, directly telling them where the problem is and how to correct it are useful. For example, when a colleague who is new to the Office of Student Affairs, makes a mistake in correctly registering student』 names, plainly pointing out his mistake is necessary. In addition to this, it would be also appropriate to tell him that student』 handwritings are normally scratchy, and there would be more typos if he has not paid enough attention to them. In a word, being honest to his mistake would not discourage his working enterprise, but encourage him to work with more cautions. However, on balance, for a leader to manage the team well, being honest is not enough for the absolutely honest to others would hurt their feelings. To avoid this, we have to consider other factors as a leader of a student organization.
To begin with, admitting to personal mistakes is a crucial characteristics for a leader, which sets foundation for self-improvement. If one is unable to acknowledge where he has failed, he will never be able to begin the process of working on the areas of weakness. In order to be a strong leader, one has to make mistakes, and confront them with a desire to do better in the future. This has more to do with improving your competence as a leader, rather than how people perceive you. A leader will constantly be faced with tough decisions. Every leader thus has to take risks, but a good leader takes calculated risks. The only way to get better at this decision-making process is to make mistakes and learn from them. Also, if you are willing to make your mistakes public, the voters and colleagues may be willing to trust you to take bigger risks in the future.
In addition, how to cooperate with other teammates is also worth noticing. In other words, team cooperation is able to improve the efficiency when encountering difficulties. According to a survey concted by Gallup, after polling hundreds of student leaders from universities in California, a significant percentage of them regard that being cooperative in dealing with problems could get everybody involved when making decisions. During the discussion, suggestions from different members would make the problems comprehensively considered, and hence minimizing the chance to ignoring certain aspects. Meanwhile, letting everyone have an opportunity to express his opinion makes them feel a part of the team, which is essential to build team spirit.
To sum up, there is no denying that honesty could help a student leader to run the organization. However, to consider it as the most important one is too absolute, and there are other factors, such as admitting to errors and teamwork, that are indispensable for a leader to take consideration.
G. 托福獨立作文需要寫400字
那個～其實我覺得是可以寫那麼多的～我考試的時候考了一篇580字的（從看到題目就開始寫，沒有停頓，打字要快，最後剩下兩分鍾檢查語法和拼寫）～然後獨立性寫作得了滿分～
當然主要是條理清晰，句式富於變換，單詞變化多～盡力而為吧～但是寫多是不會扣分的～
H. 英語高手幫看一篇托福作文，有多狠批多狠，給個分數，15分敬上！
批不了多狠，就給些建議吧。
1.個別表達還是屬於chinglish。
2.有語法錯誤，如果不能保證定語從句的完全正確，換其他表達方式吧。
3.作為一篇說理性文章應該盡量避免反問句，而是用肯定句或是絕對否定句來表明觀點。
4.整篇文章立論不清，語句有些混亂，比如後邊，一下說不能撒謊，再沒有語句轉換的時候突然又說有時候撒謊也是很必要的，這一點比較混亂
These days, honesty is getting more and more important in friendship
.As a simple reason(這一句很不地道，可簡單寫為simply speaking), honesty shows your enthusiasm, optimism, credibility and so forth.
It also makes you more reliable and dependable in your friends』 eyes, which can build up stable relationship and enlarge the scale of the circle of your friends(建議這句和上一句用and 連接成一句並把後面的非限定定語從句用so to連接).
However, nothing is absolute, so is this!（so is this可以省略，顯重復）
Telling the truth can also bring about unexpected problems, which can trigger miserable consequences.
And now let me tell something about it!（感覺搭配不當，這樣用很奇怪，改為tell you something...是不是好點兒）
Honesty is necessary. （可以和上一句連接成一句：...let me tell you something about why honesty is necessary）
If a person hardly ever tells truth, how can he or she be believed by others?(改為否定句更有說服力：he or she will never win other peoples' trust)
I have a classmate who comes from a rural area(改為rural areas), which makes him really shy and not sociable so he is often isolated in our class. (這一句語法有誤，which 指代什麼？時態也有錯誤，自己改正時態吧。改為One of my classmates is really shy and unsociable because he comes from rural areas so that he is often isolated in our class. )
But he came out to be a really good student and he got an amazing score in an exam.
That makes us more willing to ask him questions and the glamorous trait fascinates us to interact with him.（改為therefore, we are more willing ...表達會更清楚一些）
However, perhaps he was not satisfied how he was treated when he had came at the beginning of the semester,（去掉when he had came 和of the semester，直接改為at the very beginning表達也很清楚） he usually gave us false answers or just said,」 I do not know , either.」, which is not the truth at all. （把the truth改為true 用形容詞）
Several times later we got really angry with him and we all stopped talking with him.
So you see, how pivotal role honesty plays in interactions!（So you see去掉，太口語化，改為it can be seen how pivotal....）
As I have said in the first paragraph, nothing is absolute! (改為as mentioned above，nothing is absolute)
Envisage such a plot.
You are very hate smoking(語法錯誤 you hate smoking very much), while your friend is enjoying inhaling a cigarette just near where you are sitting(把just near where you are sitting 改為 just nearby), how would you say?
If you stop him seriously, by saying,」 Inhaling（改為smoking） is harmful to your health and so is to mine, stop please!(please stop it) 」, it is not a pleasant work (直接寫unpleasant就好了，把多餘的都刪去吧)for both you two.（改both of you）
Commonly, you would exalt his pose（his pose改為him吧 更地道，你的表達還是chinglish） when he is smoking. 」You look very cool with a cigarette in your mouth!」
Perhaps the instance is not very appropriate, because I just do not want to make an example knew to everybody. （這一句前半句和後半句沒有明顯因果關系，不明白這句話的意思，我覺得對文中內容意義不大，刪去也是可以的）
Is it OK （OK改為appropriate）to tell a dying patient his or her real symptom?
Isn』t it better for them to live hopefully, optimistically, enthusiastically?
Sometime(s,) truth is not welcomed and lying is also indispensible! （邏輯混亂，前後兩種觀點中間可以加一些轉換的語句，轉換有些突兀。）
It is really hard to say whether truth is always acceptable because sometimes truth makes no sense and they can cause problems, but truth is also the premise of friendship. So what is my viewpoint? Just the saying,」 Nothing is absolute!」
I. 托福作文
1.Using number for describing skill is not very suitable,"a variety of"is ok
2."a man should be learned",and you can't omit"that"between "person"and"should"( the most important skill of a person should learn in their lives is honesty.).....confused,can't get what you want to express....
3."basically moral"Using the bottom of morality is better,
4."pay for the tax"is not very suitable.Use pay ty
5"promising something"is easy to be ambiguous,Using "a promise" is better,
6.My advice for you is to rephrase the whole paragraph 2.
7.Mind the article in paragraph 3,"such as the army.........."
8. "and he would never call me forever"omit the "forever"
9."... can help me to get well along with others, and have more friends around you"according to this,I think what you then wanted to express was that "honesty can help you make more friends"so,the subject should be "honesty" for the second clause,so your sentence is something like this:"Honesty has more friends around you"but I think your original saying was "you can have more friends"so you need to add a subjcet
in the second one.
10."pretty much more than "ambiguity again.
11"improve the friendship"looks strange,use" add to"
12. "They may tell me the secrets they have"not suitable
13."Virtually"is not suitable here,you can use "ostensibly "(Virtually , I do not lose anything, like money or something else)
*14.Here"a big deal"means VIP I think,I'm vague about if this usage is correct here.
.......
I think this topic was so abstract that you couldn't grasp it well.You took too many instances throughout,and always habitually used the idioms you had used again and again before,for instance "first and foremost ......and etc".Moreover you need to work out some terms which is about your papers before you further compose your paper like"the social action""the bottom of morality" and etc.Do not try to create the terms on your own
but this's still a good paper.
hope you can achieve your goal in the future= )
I wish your every success in the future=)
J. 請考過托福的作文高手回答 急!!!
最好不要分開寫
應該在第一段先闡述是支持還是反對，寫出總的原因
然後分幾點支持和反對（兩點或三點，根據你聽到記住的多少）
每一段
先是過渡，比如the first point he uses to refute the reading passage is...
然後the reading passage states that...
最後however, the professor argues that...
以這種格式再寫三段就可以了
如果沒有時間最後可以不用再總結一次
因為你在第一段已經說清楚了
最主要的給分點在於你那三段的內容全不全