A. 托福作文题目
1. Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe? that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
2. People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
3. People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? something different Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your choice.
4. Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young alts. Other people think? that friends are the most important influence on young alts. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to) support your position.
TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，简称TOEFL），是由美国教育测验服务社（ETS）举办的英语能力考试，全名为“检定非英语为母语者的英语能力考试”，中文音译为“托福”。TOEFL有三种，分别是：纸考、机考和网考，新托福满分是120分。托福复习主要资料为托福机经（又称民间托福答案题库）。TOEFL考试的有效期为两年（从考试日期开始计算）；例如：2003年1月18日参加考试，这次考试成绩的有效期是从2003年1月18日到2005年1月18日。2014年4月5日，英国内政部与美国教育考试服务中心（ETS）合约到期后，不再续约，而英国大学也不将承认其机构下托福和托业的英语语言成绩。
TOEFL，Test of English as a Foreign Language，由美国教育测验服务社( ETS, Ecational Testing Service)在全世界举办，是一种针对母语非英语的人进行的英语水平的考试。TOEFL是出国留学(美国、加拿大)的必备考试成绩，美国和加拿大已有超过2400所大学和学院承认这项考试成绩，规定了申请者的最低TOEFL录取分数线。TOEFL成绩与奖学金的成功率是相关的。
TOEFL
国外许多政府部门，私人或机构奖学金计划，执照证明机构等也是依据TOEFL成绩来评审接受人的英文程度。在中国，TOEFL亦是英语水平的一种证明，有一些单位(特别是三资企业)采用它衡量应聘者的英语水平。从一九九八年七月起，托福考试在许多国家从传统的纸笔方式转变成电脑方式。但亚洲一些国家，如中国大陆、台湾和香港澳门地区等仍采用原来传统的纸笔方式，暂时不作改变。预计2002年下半年实现计算机化考试。
纸笔考试是由正确答案的数量总和来决定成绩总分，而不管问题的难易。电脑考试则不同，它根据回答问题的质量来给出下一个问题，如果考生回答得正确，电脑将提高问题的难度；如果考生回答错误，电脑将降低问题难度。因此成绩是由正确答案的难度来决定得分，而不是由正确答案的数量。电脑考试的写作一项，考生可以选择打字或书写。 电脑考试的费用：美国及其属地和加拿大为USD，所有其它国家为USD。
B. 新托福作文
小作文，结合各种模板，总结一个最适合自己的。我是考试刚进去的时候，就把背好模板写在纸上了，该空格的地方划了条长线，听小作文听力的时候，只需要把几个观点听出来填进去，然后再写。当然，我在山东考的，不知道你是哪里人。老师是不会管的，但还是不要太嚣张地写。我觉得这样做的好处在于，你可以很清楚地知道自己要听什么，要写什么。并且在长久的考试快结束的时候，即使是思路开始模糊了，也有条理性的写出小作文。小作文可以拿good的。这是很帮作文提分的。
大作文。中国学生的普遍错误在于喜欢写长难复杂句。可真正的外国老师喜欢KISS(keep
it
simple
&
simple).一个句子不要求写的多么难，以此来显示自己的定语状语等从句学的很棒一类的。其实即便是每个句子都是主谓宾，只要没有语法逻辑错误，一样拿高分。我不主张大作文背模板，开头和结尾背上两句出彩的话就可以。中间部分一定要逻辑清晰，用连接词很重要。最重要的就是语法错误。不用把重点放在怎么写出华美的句子上，从最简单的句子做起。然后找错误。再就是，例子很重要。他们喜欢看学生用简单的通俗的例子说明一个很抽象的观点。不要满篇都是抽象的句子，每段写上一个符合逻辑的例子，一样可以博得阅卷老师的欢心。
祝好。
C. 托福课写作文
O(∩_∩)O~
写这个的话，加一下俺
D. 托福作文范文26篇还不收藏更待何时
合写作部分，考生需要在2分45秒内看完一篇学术性文章，接着听一段与该话题相关的讲座录音，写作的任务是在20分钟内就讲座的要点，结合刚才读到的学术文章的内容，写一篇概述。
E. 老托福的作文
选考我不知道是什么意思，但是老托肯定也是必须考作文的，而且肯定是笔答
F. 托福写作范文：诚实是否是社团领导者最重要的品质
Honesty is a good quality to lead a student organization. A lot of students vote for a campaign candidate who is loyal and honest as the best one to lead a student organization. As far as I am concerned, being honest is essential in running a students union; however there are other factors that draw the same attention.
Admittedly, telling the truth when dealing with student affairs is helpful for colleagues to improve. In order to fully support other workmate, directly telling them where the problem is and how to correct it are useful. For example, when a colleague who is new to the Office of Student Affairs, makes a mistake in correctly registering student’ names, plainly pointing out his mistake is necessary. In addition to this, it would be also appropriate to tell him that student’ handwritings are normally scratchy, and there would be more typos if he has not paid enough attention to them. In a word, being honest to his mistake would not discourage his working enterprise, but encourage him to work with more cautions. However, on balance, for a leader to manage the team well, being honest is not enough for the absolutely honest to others would hurt their feelings. To avoid this, we have to consider other factors as a leader of a student organization.
To begin with, admitting to personal mistakes is a crucial characteristics for a leader, which sets foundation for self-improvement. If one is unable to acknowledge where he has failed, he will never be able to begin the process of working on the areas of weakness. In order to be a strong leader, one has to make mistakes, and confront them with a desire to do better in the future. This has more to do with improving your competence as a leader, rather than how people perceive you. A leader will constantly be faced with tough decisions. Every leader thus has to take risks, but a good leader takes calculated risks. The only way to get better at this decision-making process is to make mistakes and learn from them. Also, if you are willing to make your mistakes public, the voters and colleagues may be willing to trust you to take bigger risks in the future.
In addition, how to cooperate with other teammates is also worth noticing. In other words, team cooperation is able to improve the efficiency when encountering difficulties. According to a survey concted by Gallup, after polling hundreds of student leaders from universities in California, a significant percentage of them regard that being cooperative in dealing with problems could get everybody involved when making decisions. During the discussion, suggestions from different members would make the problems comprehensively considered, and hence minimizing the chance to ignoring certain aspects. Meanwhile, letting everyone have an opportunity to express his opinion makes them feel a part of the team, which is essential to build team spirit.
To sum up, there is no denying that honesty could help a student leader to run the organization. However, to consider it as the most important one is too absolute, and there are other factors, such as admitting to errors and teamwork, that are indispensable for a leader to take consideration.
G. 托福独立作文需要写400字
那个～其实我觉得是可以写那么多的～我考试的时候考了一篇580字的（从看到题目就开始写，没有停顿，打字要快，最后剩下两分钟检查语法和拼写）～然后独立性写作得了满分～
当然主要是条理清晰，句式富于变换，单词变化多～尽力而为吧～但是写多是不会扣分的～
H. 英语高手帮看一篇托福作文，有多狠批多狠，给个分数，15分敬上！
批不了多狠，就给些建议吧。
1.个别表达还是属于chinglish。
2.有语法错误，如果不能保证定语从句的完全正确，换其他表达方式吧。
3.作为一篇说理性文章应该尽量避免反问句，而是用肯定句或是绝对否定句来表明观点。
4.整篇文章立论不清，语句有些混乱，比如后边，一下说不能撒谎，再没有语句转换的时候突然又说有时候撒谎也是很必要的，这一点比较混乱
These days, honesty is getting more and more important in friendship
.As a simple reason(这一句很不地道，可简单写为simply speaking), honesty shows your enthusiasm, optimism, credibility and so forth.
It also makes you more reliable and dependable in your friends’ eyes, which can build up stable relationship and enlarge the scale of the circle of your friends(建议这句和上一句用and 连接成一句并把后面的非限定定语从句用so to连接).
However, nothing is absolute, so is this!（so is this可以省略，显重复）
Telling the truth can also bring about unexpected problems, which can trigger miserable consequences.
And now let me tell something about it!（感觉搭配不当，这样用很奇怪，改为tell you something...是不是好点儿）
Honesty is necessary. （可以和上一句连接成一句：...let me tell you something about why honesty is necessary）
If a person hardly ever tells truth, how can he or she be believed by others?(改为否定句更有说服力：he or she will never win other peoples' trust)
I have a classmate who comes from a rural area(改为rural areas), which makes him really shy and not sociable so he is often isolated in our class. (这一句语法有误，which 指代什么？时态也有错误，自己改正时态吧。改为One of my classmates is really shy and unsociable because he comes from rural areas so that he is often isolated in our class. )
But he came out to be a really good student and he got an amazing score in an exam.
That makes us more willing to ask him questions and the glamorous trait fascinates us to interact with him.（改为therefore, we are more willing ...表达会更清楚一些）
However, perhaps he was not satisfied how he was treated when he had came at the beginning of the semester,（去掉when he had came 和of the semester，直接改为at the very beginning表达也很清楚） he usually gave us false answers or just said,” I do not know , either.”, which is not the truth at all. （把the truth改为true 用形容词）
Several times later we got really angry with him and we all stopped talking with him.
So you see, how pivotal role honesty plays in interactions!（So you see去掉，太口语化，改为it can be seen how pivotal....）
As I have said in the first paragraph, nothing is absolute! (改为as mentioned above，nothing is absolute)
Envisage such a plot.
You are very hate smoking(语法错误 you hate smoking very much), while your friend is enjoying inhaling a cigarette just near where you are sitting(把just near where you are sitting 改为 just nearby), how would you say?
If you stop him seriously, by saying,” Inhaling（改为smoking） is harmful to your health and so is to mine, stop please!(please stop it) ”, it is not a pleasant work (直接写unpleasant就好了，把多余的都删去吧)for both you two.（改both of you）
Commonly, you would exalt his pose（his pose改为him吧 更地道，你的表达还是chinglish） when he is smoking. ”You look very cool with a cigarette in your mouth!”
Perhaps the instance is not very appropriate, because I just do not want to make an example knew to everybody. （这一句前半句和后半句没有明显因果关系，不明白这句话的意思，我觉得对文中内容意义不大，删去也是可以的）
Is it OK （OK改为appropriate）to tell a dying patient his or her real symptom?
Isn’t it better for them to live hopefully, optimistically, enthusiastically?
Sometime(s,) truth is not welcomed and lying is also indispensible! （逻辑混乱，前后两种观点中间可以加一些转换的语句，转换有些突兀。）
It is really hard to say whether truth is always acceptable because sometimes truth makes no sense and they can cause problems, but truth is also the premise of friendship. So what is my viewpoint? Just the saying,” Nothing is absolute!”
I. 托福作文
1.Using number for describing skill is not very suitable,"a variety of"is ok
2."a man should be learned",and you can't omit"that"between "person"and"should"( the most important skill of a person should learn in their lives is honesty.).....confused,can't get what you want to express....
3."basically moral"Using the bottom of morality is better,
4."pay for the tax"is not very suitable.Use pay ty
5"promising something"is easy to be ambiguous,Using "a promise" is better,
6.My advice for you is to rephrase the whole paragraph 2.
7.Mind the article in paragraph 3,"such as the army.........."
8. "and he would never call me forever"omit the "forever"
9."... can help me to get well along with others, and have more friends around you"according to this,I think what you then wanted to express was that "honesty can help you make more friends"so,the subject should be "honesty" for the second clause,so your sentence is something like this:"Honesty has more friends around you"but I think your original saying was "you can have more friends"so you need to add a subjcet
in the second one.
10."pretty much more than "ambiguity again.
11"improve the friendship"looks strange,use" add to"
12. "They may tell me the secrets they have"not suitable
13."Virtually"is not suitable here,you can use "ostensibly "(Virtually , I do not lose anything, like money or something else)
*14.Here"a big deal"means VIP I think,I'm vague about if this usage is correct here.
.......
I think this topic was so abstract that you couldn't grasp it well.You took too many instances throughout,and always habitually used the idioms you had used again and again before,for instance "first and foremost ......and etc".Moreover you need to work out some terms which is about your papers before you further compose your paper like"the social action""the bottom of morality" and etc.Do not try to create the terms on your own
but this's still a good paper.
hope you can achieve your goal in the future= )
I wish your every success in the future=)
J. 请考过托福的作文高手回答 急!!!
最好不要分开写
应该在第一段先阐述是支持还是反对，写出总的原因
然后分几点支持和反对（两点或三点，根据你听到记住的多少）
每一段
先是过渡，比如the first point he uses to refute the reading passage is...
然后the reading passage states that...
最后however, the professor argues that...
以这种格式再写三段就可以了
如果没有时间最后可以不用再总结一次
因为你在第一段已经说清楚了
最主要的给分点在于你那三段的内容全不全